Saturday, 24 January 2009

Embers

A pardon
for all the sins
and the blood
and the stillborn children
cast to a sodden grave.

It wasn’t much to ask
of a priest
and a bishop
and a holy man on a horse
but they turned away.

And as the fire seared her flesh
but before the smoke suffocated her
she forgave them.

And the village died
for want of a midwife
and a doctor
and a voice to tell them
when to plant the seeds.

11 comments:

Karen said...

I just read Ken Follett's World Without End, and this reminds me of that in some ways.

Very skillful telling of a tale in few words!

Rachel Green said...

Thank you :)

That'll be another book on my wish list then!

BT said...

Super poem Rach. So true, too.

aims said...

People were and are - such idiots.

Rachel Green said...

Thanks you ladies!

Dave King said...

Punchy and bare, just the vehicle for what you had to say.

Rachel Green said...

Thank you, Dave.

Shullie said...

sent a chill down my spine...

beautiful, disturbing and poinant!

Rachel Green said...

Thanks Shullie

Unknown said...

Did I comment on this elsewhere? I know I read (and loved) it. No matter. Beautiful still.

Rachel Green said...

Probably :)
I make things serve multiple prompts!