Thursday 28 May 2009

Morning Mist

Morning mist
slips gentle as a lover
through Lebanese cedars.
I stroll past swings and roundabouts,
sullen in the growing light,
and remember the sky
rotating.

9 comments:

Becca's Dirt said...

Nice quote.

Rachel Green said...

Quotation? Did I steal a bit of this from somewhere without realising?

Unknown said...

Oh, that's lovely, Rachel, painting and verse.

Rachel Green said...

Thanks, Stephanie :)

BT said...

I don't think you did Rachel! Lovely verse and super painting.

Rachel Green said...

Thank you Gina. I was pleased with this one.

aims said...

The sky rotating - I remember that all too well. :0)

Rachel Green said...

and the slightly sick feeling!

aims said...

Exactly!