Tuesday, 3 November 2009

November Poems 03

Pages of Filler

words flow quick and easy

like liquid silk poured

onto a hot Teflon raincoat

in a summer thunderstorm

white pages turn grey,

turn black with paragraphs of text

white ladders of river type

climb from footnote to headline

snakes of white seen with half-closed eyes

but the prose is deceptive

purple description where what's needed

is scarlet death

and page-flipping action

and lots of white space.

6 comments:

sonia said...

fab poem

Unknown said...

Great poem, too harsh on its writer though, I think.

aims said...

I can see this perfectly.

Rachel Green said...

Thank you all.

Steph, I couldn't write purple prose if I tried - I'm rubbish at description!

Unknown said...

Purple prose is all I write!

Rachel Green said...

Pah!