process
developed plot
she's not from Birmingham
but from a village in Cornwall
scandal
© Rachel Green 2016
drooling sky
the wind shakes the rain
from bare branches
© Rachel Green 2016
print-out
possible stroke symptoms
doctor's visit
perhaps at some point
I will be well again
© Rachel Green 2016
my review of 'The Bone Clocks'
will make me no friends
despite my praise
I loved parts of it --
two-fifths by page count --
found the rest turgid
off-screen deaths
© Rachel Green 2016
her plot developments promote renewed enthusiasm
© Rachel Green 2016
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