Wednesday 9 March 2016

short forms 9th March 2016

process
developed plot
she's not from Birmingham
but from a village in Cornwall
scandal


© Rachel Green 2016

drooling sky
the wind shakes the rain
from bare branches


© Rachel Green 2016

print-out
possible stroke symptoms
doctor's visit
perhaps at some point
I will be well again


© Rachel Green 2016

my review of 'The Bone Clocks'
will make me no friends
despite my praise

I loved parts of it --
two-fifths by page count --
found the rest turgid

off-screen deaths


© Rachel Green 2016

her plot developments promote renewed enthusiasm

© Rachel Green 2016

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