Monday 19 December 2016

short forms 19th December 2016

"uncle"
ten years older
dad's sister's widower
she reminds him of his late wife
her aunt


© Rachel Green 2016

dead pigeon
in the cemetery bin
discarded cedar tree


© Rachel Green 2016

Mr Trump
(an orange guinea pig with stupid hair)
teaches himself to beg
for pieces of carrot
or has he taught me to offer them?


© Rachel Green 2016

a thousand pages
too long for a novel
cut it down

Best to cut eighty percent
to leave it a shade under
two hundred

that's eight words in ten


© Rachel Green 2016

Edits. Killing darlings loses the intimacy.

© Rachel Green 2016

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