Monday 23 February 2009

Wetlands Field


A break in the clouds
Sunlight floods the field
dogs run rabbit paths

4 comments:

Jinksy said...

Two more syllables in the middle line, and this would be a lovely haiku...

Rachel Green said...

Thanks Jinksy.

Haiku are not necessarily 5-7-5 see
http://readwritepoem.org/2009/02/14/what-is-it-about-haiku-anyway/

aims said...

So most of your snow has gone then?

They (and who are they) are calling for snow right through until Thursday here. sigh....

Of course - this is the time of the year when we start to get the most of it really. And the heaviest of it as well. Breaking limbs etc....although that kind of snow usually waits until the robins come back and the first of the tulips start showing.

Rachel Green said...

Yes, Aims, I think we've seen the last of the snow over here.