Saturday 28 March 2009

I Remember Earth


I remember the crash of waves against the shore
and the clattery scramble of pebbles desperate to avoid their clutches.
The rush of a bats wing past your ear,
and the glimpse of it against the fading dusk.
The scent of turned soil, a breath of mint and the
ant’s eggs like golden treasures under a warm stone.
I remember setting a bonfire to light the darkness,
the flames dancing and the wood crackling
and the smell of roast potatoes
and the tang of the first snowflake of winter.

12 comments:

Gail said...

Wonderful words and art too.

aims said...

Oh! Oh! Oh!

Absolutely love it!

Oh my!

Rachel Green said...

Thank you kindy, both.

I always worry about my 'grown-up poems.

spacedlaw said...

That's lovely.

aims said...

Why would you worry about your 'grown-up' poetry when it is so stunning and beautiful?!

I note that as time goes by you just get better and better. Some of it just takes my breath away.

Rachel Green said...

Thank you Aims. That's very kind of you.

aims said...

Not being kind dear friend. Just being honest.

BT said...

I love this grown up one Rachel. Fabulous. And of course the picture.

Unknown said...

Beautiful words and art (as all have mentioned), and - oh! - potatoes.

Rachel Green said...

Thank you

Anya Padyam said...

It is beautiful!

janetleigh said...

I really enjoyed reading this and the imagery is an eye-feast!