Thursday, 18 February 2016

short forms 18th February 2016

fights the devil
"temptation is evil"
this from the woman who killed three

© Rachel Green 2016

black crow
against the February blue
telephone wires

© Rachel Green 2016

mouth problems
my left cheek swollen
half a Godfather
An abscess, perhaps?
but there's little pain

© Rachel Green 2016

first review
of my Gilded Cage story

Some typos and missed commas
but a great story
unforeseen twist

Thanks, Chris :)

© Rachel Green 2016

Ulcer. She missed a dental appointment.

© Rachel Green 2016


Stephanie Wright said...

Ouch! I hope you feel better.

Superb haiku. You rock.

Getting through the story. I am so pleased to be part of the reading circle. Thank you for the confidence. <3

Rachel Green said...

Take your time. The editor has it now.

I'm not in pain, as such. At least, not yet.